@Alan Premise - Diabetes orthographs - Arms moved and pupils added


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  1. Alan PostingsTuesday, 7 May 2019 at 14:01:00 BST

    Hi Tia. Again, better. The only problem with 'bead eyes' is that they tend to have no focus in 3D - Eg. you can't tell where a character is looking. So, you should have a pupil of some kind if possible. I'd try a version with 'real/cartoon eyes' too - Pupil, Iris, white. Also, the chest circle is a little off in the side view...you'd only see half a circle not the other side of it (make sense?). Overall, I know you've made a lot of tweaks but your design is getting better and better with each fix.

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