@Alan Premise - Diabetes orthographs - Arms moved and pupils added
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind (2004) - Non-linear storytelling
Figure 1. Movie poster (2004) Non-linear methods: Chronicle (Linear storytelling) - The film starts off with a non-linear storytelling method. This is as the audience are unaware as to where they are, who the characters are and what they are doing. The scenes also change suddenly and time shifts backwards and forwards. The story then becomes linear once Joel starts to get his memories of Clementine removed. This is as he is in a dream state trying to stop his memories of her from leaving him. Figure 2. Joel and Clementine meeting Retrograde (Events in reverse order) - This is shown throughout the movie without the audience realising until they are nearing the end of the film. At the start of the film the audience understand that Joel and Clementine have only just met and that Joel and Clementine's feelings towards each other grow, but towards the end of the film it is made clear that not only did Clementine and Joel know each other previously, they were also
Hi Tia. Again, better. The only problem with 'bead eyes' is that they tend to have no focus in 3D - Eg. you can't tell where a character is looking. So, you should have a pupil of some kind if possible. I'd try a version with 'real/cartoon eyes' too - Pupil, Iris, white. Also, the chest circle is a little off in the side view...you'd only see half a circle not the other side of it (make sense?). Overall, I know you've made a lot of tweaks but your design is getting better and better with each fix.
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