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Little Monster - Script update

Over summer break I have spent my time looking into the script for 'Little Monster' and how I could adapt it, from the help given to me by Phil and Alan, to make it better.  Below is the update script (new parts to the script are in orange):  The camera fades in to show an empty space, it is well lit and the walls and floor shown are white. Little monster runs into scene. He is shouting and starts stomping.  Voiceover: (sigh) ‘Hello again. What do you want?’ Little monster begins to jump up and down. After a few seconds it then starts to become tired and then suddenly falls asleep on the floor. Voiceover: ‘Thats my diabetes. Its type one, and sometimes it can be a pain.’ The little monster is shown asleep in the scene for a few seconds. Voiceover: ‘Hello?..... Hey?......’ The little monster begins to stir. Voiceover: ‘Wake up!’ The little monster wakes up startled. He’s on his feet looking around panicking. ...

@Phil Premise - Script 6

Below is the 6th version of my script. I have looked more into the idea of writing a script that involves my Diabetes monster solely throughout. I like the idea of having the voice over and the character conversing.

@Phil Premise - Script - Version 5

Below is my 5th version of my premise script. After speaking to Alan I have decided to start with talking about myself in the present, then speak about how I found out that I had Diabetes when I was 5, and then how it affects me now.

Collaboration - Script

Below are the different drafts of the script that I had written for the collaboration animatic. Draft 1 Draft 2 Draft 3 Official

@Phil Fantastic Voyage - Script post 1

From script to screen - Official amended script

From script to screen - Script