@Alan Little Monster - Moving on and editing
After feedback from my major project and talking to Alan it has been decided that editing and tweaking my film will be needed in order to make sure that it is ready to send to the graduate show and other film festivals (if they are still going ahead). One suggesting was to create screen wipes or cuts to make it so that the audience do not become bored of watching the character run around to the different areas within the set. For that, I have come up with one idea: When I say, "Later that evening..." - A clock comes up to the screen and then back (like in the old batman series, but the background does not spin), this would represent the change in time from being at the Natural History Museum in London to going to my GP. I may need more help as to where to place more cuts/screen wipes as towards the end of the animation I feel that adding cuts/ screen wipes could change the flow of what is being said by the voice over. I have also decided on bits of the animation to cut out , ...