@Phil Premise - Script 6

Below is the 6th version of my script. I have looked more into the idea of writing a script that involves my Diabetes monster solely throughout. I like the idea of having the voice over and the character conversing.


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  1. Tia WhiteheadFriday, 12 April 2019 at 13:54:00 BST

    Hi Phil,

    I have looked into what you said about involving the Diabetes monster character more within the animation and script. I like how I have involved the character more in this script, any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

    Thank you.

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  2. tutorphilSaturday, 13 April 2019 at 10:24:00 BST

    Hi Tia - this is SOOOOOOOOO much more promising, don't you agree? I think you need to move immediately to creating a loose animatic that really exploits the 'white space' idea and the simple sets - but where all the emphasis is on bringing out the character of your creature... some references to give you some further inspiration!

    Manipulation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mG1hfBf1ppk. (quality is poor...)
    Duck Amuck: https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x2ofats

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    1. Tia WhiteheadSaturday, 13 April 2019 at 20:45:00 BST

      Hi Phil, Yes I agree! I really like my script now! Ill start working on that :)

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